Keep "not writing"
This was freaking hilarious. I love the random cuts, the kitty fight, the unscripted flow....
You should make more...
NOW....
I’M ADDICTED....
mmm muffins
Keep "not writing"
This was freaking hilarious. I love the random cuts, the kitty fight, the unscripted flow....
You should make more...
NOW....
I’M ADDICTED....
mmm muffins
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD
why did you screw with the speed and pitch of that song!!!!???!!!!
You cannot alter the OFFSPRING. You children don't know how pissed off that makes actual punks. STOP F#^%IN with our music.
Other then that it was a good flash. Keep doing what you're doing.
JUST FIX THE MUSIC
That was some good animation
The only reason I gave you a low sound score was the choice to use "let's get it started" instead of the original version
"LET's GET RETARDED" it would have worked better with the randomness that way, and it's on the Black Eyed Peas cd anyway. I hope you make more flash this was enjoyable.
What happen run out of Family Guy jokes?
Animation was horrible, stiff and looked like construction paper. Although the art style wasn't that bad, South Park already has done this.
Jokes were stale and rehashed from several animated series. Try to make new material don't steal jokes.
The premise was good but the execution needs lots of polish and rewriting before it's done.
Actually, I think the animation was pretty cool. It was simple, and a bit stylish, which complements the mood of the cartoon. Maybe if i were using sophisticated humor, I'd make sophisticated art. At this point, you can compare pretty much anything to The Simpsons, South Park, and Family Guy. Maybe if that's all you watch, then that's all you have to compare it to. Jokes weren't stolen, but I can see how the humor is the same. Thanks for the review HangingBunny
I'm drunk
and that still was not good.
I am in awe
You don't need any improvement other than adjusting the voice levels a bit.
You have the next Bitey of Brackenwood.
That was muy bueno
Good animation, funny characters
This was spot on how the police will just grab a man minding his own buisness not hurting anyone and throw him in jail with the degenerates.
The moral is Do what you want to do as long as it's not hurting somebody.
The song fit (not your fault some people couldn't understand the lyrics) if they want to go through life only speaking one language they are missing out on hundreds of cool songs and books just because they're not in English.....I blame the schools and parents.......ahh hell I'm gonna go burn one under a tree now
Thank you for making this
Even if the art style is not what I normally prefer it was beautiful. Your stylized line weights and quality give the piece a quiet gothic quality that catches your attention and focusing it on the story. All I can say is WOW!!! I look forward to seeing more from you.
thank you very much...it's comments like this that keeps me wanting to continue making the Ortus series.
This shows promise
You have a good begining of what could be a much longer animation. The only suggestion I have is to adjust your volume levels in flash to avoid that fade in mid-film.
Keep it up, you actually have me interested on what happens next.
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